Part 1 TWC BOS Contingient Recruiting segment

So we have action elements to input into the vid and more content.   This is our starting point.



Feel free to comment, criticise, offer suggestions to improve it.

First comment, brilliant bit of editing work, I can appreciate the time it must have taken.

 (New paragraph). Just one thing, I think a long shot (from Tail's A/C) of start up might have been a good look. AND perhaps you should have been actor 1 as you were #1 pilot, it's like giving top billing to a supporting role. The hero, and therefore star, of all flying movies usually fills the role of flt. lead.
 
(New paragraph) But very nice indeed.

I have the long shots from both my tail and Tailspin’s perspectives and did have it in there originally, however I was conscious of the vids length so took it out. We can always reinsert it. All the original tracks are still there to be edited at our will.

I think the next segment should be like the “best of” action scenes with us in large numbers in combat and flying JABO Ops flying together and in winged pairs.   Rather than long film sequences, The middle should be brief snippets of high action like mini flashbacks.

That film above will actually eventually be cut in two or three seperate pieces with the insertion of the new material so it wont be as it appears above.  Ill take the best of it , Recut it again to keep the length short.

I liked the music but we can change all that too.

We also need to work on a high def TWC logo...That one looks a little tired when increased in size, or perhaps a snappy hard hitting TWC intro in Film. (Working on an idea).

The end scene with credits is just something I slapped in there to bring the video to a conclusion.  That will change in the final version.

Same with the end landing sequence, that will go completely.  Need to put some thought into a quality ending...maybe FC related?

You were No. 1 as this whole thing was your idea. I went No, 4 in the credits to protects Roughs reputation to the world who managed to fly around the sky in left Echelon like a demented unbalanced washing machine across a tiled floor!  LOL